In The Name Of God

As Mr. Goodarzi sample summary, Mr. Salimi started his writing with explaining the date and the time that online conference started. One of his article good points was that he told who was the discussion handler and according to text Mr. Goodarzi was the discussion handler.

We can’t find too much grammatical and vocabulary problems, but he could say that which participated person in the discussion said what, and he or she was against which person's claims. It was nice that he used percents (60% or 40%) in his article and it was better if he just tried to tell more about things that happened in the discussion, and I think he could add his opinions about the discussion topic at the last of his summary.

In general it was a good summary as the first person who just posted in the blog.

Farvardin 3rd / Daniel Sheikhi